This is my 6 sentence adventure story
1.Title
My dad rescued me.
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2. Set the scene (Who and where?)
My family and friends are on a high mountain
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3.Rising Action (Building the excitement)
We climbing high and high, it is hard but we have a rope.
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4. Climax.
My rope breaks
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5: Falling action
My Dad catches me with a big carpet.
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6: Resolution
We are all home and have a rest and eat Indian food
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i like the way you described when you fell dawn the mountain how your dad saved you with the carpet. But i think you should say that the carpet is the super hero.
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